Tuesday, June 30, 2015

Describing a setting

Here is our class writing today. We were using what we could see, hear, feel and smell to describe a setting. Please write in the comments any more descriptive sentences you can think of...

­I can see black, spooky spider webs in every corner of the room. I walk forward slowly and suddenly I can feel the webs sticking to my face. “AARRGGHH” I scream and rip them off my face. Wolves howl in the night like dogs having a giant evil disco. The smell of old wet wood and dead things rotting hits my nose like I’m stuck in a garbage dump. 
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17 comments:

  1. Mr StygallJuly 1, 2015 at 8:51 AM

    i can hear cockroches crawling by kate r

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  2. UnknownJuly 1, 2015 at 6:46 PM

    I can see little bugs starting to come near me aaAAHHH! by Kate C.

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  3. UnknownJuly 1, 2015 at 7:51 PM

    I can see a spooky ghost spying from under the stairs.By Esme

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  4. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:46 AM

    i see wet mosshey moss oliver

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  5. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:48 AM

    I hear stairs creacking.Daniel

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  6. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:48 AM

    i see scraped paint oliver

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  7. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:49 AM

    i hear creapy nosies oliver

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  8. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:50 AM

    I hear creepy monstours noises.Daniel

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  9. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:50 AM

    i hear rats oliver

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  10. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:51 AM

    I smell dead things rotting

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  11. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:52 AM

    i smell a deserted house oliver

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  12. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:53 AM

    I smell dead things rotting.Daniel

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  13. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:54 AM

    i smell trouble

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  14. Room Critters7July 2, 2015 at 8:54 AM

    i smell trouble oliver

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  15. AnonymousJuly 2, 2015 at 4:13 PM

    i can smell rotten rats by ben king

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  16. Room Critters7July 20, 2015 at 8:45 AM

    i smell stinkey rotten poop

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  17. Ben PetersenJuly 21, 2015 at 3:51 PM

    I hear squeaking doors and windows. By Ben Petersen

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